I'm an amateur writer; more amateur than writer. 
Would love some feedback: good and bad please.
Please see the attached photo for my inspiration.
(And yes, my Cup size is probably wrong. Just roll with it.)
01 Beth Post Partum
MF(20), big-breasts, doctor, exploit
CH1
Beth checked her calendar again, for the fourth time that morning: yes, her appointment was 2 pm this afternoon.
It had been a year since the birth of her daughter and she just couldn’t shake this funk. For the past 6 months or so she had been gradually becoming more and more depressed. She was at the point now where she had no interest in getting together with her friends, her family, or even date-night with Mark, her husband.
She had even agonized over this appointment with Dr. Oharu. He was a reputable doctor according to her neighbor Gary, but she was torn between staying home, not wanting to see anybody and getting the help she knew she needed. She thought about Gary, he was so nice, she just couldn’t figure out why he was single. To be honest, he hadn’t paid her much attention until the later stages of her pregnancy. Each day it seemed, whether she was doing something in the back yard or just walking to her car, there he was ready for a quick conversation. Mark had teased her speculating that their neighbors' sudden interest had everything to do with her breast increase from her regular 38C to her new 40G cups. She had hushed him away, ‘Gary was a nice man, he was just lonely and wanted someone to talk to.’
She spent the afternoon trying to keep busy so as not to worry, but she agonized the entire time. Finally, 20 to 2, she made herself get in the car and go to the appointment. She checked the address again to be sure, 127 Collier Street was in a rough part of town. She scolded herself again, ‘Bethany Nicole! You stop this right now!’ Boy, did she need help.
Jin Oharu, Dr. Oharu, had emigrated to the US when he was 18, completed his education and residency as a general practitioner and had promptly been sued for malpractice within one year of being licensed. But all that was in California, here in Arkansas, their record keeping, and background checks were lacking at best. He had set up his new practice in an out-of-the-way four-corner town just south-east of Little Rock; almost at the Mississippi border. These hicks saw one thing: a Japanese doctor. Of course, the seedier members of town paid good money for ‘prescriptions’.
The ‘scripts’ were his main income, but he did have a few real patients, mostly older people complaining about their arthritis and rheumatism. He had one coming in today. One of his ‘script’ customers, Gary, had recommended her to him. Of course, he had said no way, not needing another old lady coming in, but after hearing the description of this young lady, well, he was convinced. Apparently, she was about 5’4, long brown hair, maybe 22 years old, chubby, but huge tits. Well, Jin had been sold at the word ‘huge’. She would be at the office in an hour.
Would love some feedback: good and bad please.
Please see the attached photo for my inspiration.
(And yes, my Cup size is probably wrong. Just roll with it.)
01 Beth Post Partum
MF(20), big-breasts, doctor, exploit
CH1
Beth checked her calendar again, for the fourth time that morning: yes, her appointment was 2 pm this afternoon.
It had been a year since the birth of her daughter and she just couldn’t shake this funk. For the past 6 months or so she had been gradually becoming more and more depressed. She was at the point now where she had no interest in getting together with her friends, her family, or even date-night with Mark, her husband.
She had even agonized over this appointment with Dr. Oharu. He was a reputable doctor according to her neighbor Gary, but she was torn between staying home, not wanting to see anybody and getting the help she knew she needed. She thought about Gary, he was so nice, she just couldn’t figure out why he was single. To be honest, he hadn’t paid her much attention until the later stages of her pregnancy. Each day it seemed, whether she was doing something in the back yard or just walking to her car, there he was ready for a quick conversation. Mark had teased her speculating that their neighbors' sudden interest had everything to do with her breast increase from her regular 38C to her new 40G cups. She had hushed him away, ‘Gary was a nice man, he was just lonely and wanted someone to talk to.’
She spent the afternoon trying to keep busy so as not to worry, but she agonized the entire time. Finally, 20 to 2, she made herself get in the car and go to the appointment. She checked the address again to be sure, 127 Collier Street was in a rough part of town. She scolded herself again, ‘Bethany Nicole! You stop this right now!’ Boy, did she need help.
Jin Oharu, Dr. Oharu, had emigrated to the US when he was 18, completed his education and residency as a general practitioner and had promptly been sued for malpractice within one year of being licensed. But all that was in California, here in Arkansas, their record keeping, and background checks were lacking at best. He had set up his new practice in an out-of-the-way four-corner town just south-east of Little Rock; almost at the Mississippi border. These hicks saw one thing: a Japanese doctor. Of course, the seedier members of town paid good money for ‘prescriptions’.
The ‘scripts’ were his main income, but he did have a few real patients, mostly older people complaining about their arthritis and rheumatism. He had one coming in today. One of his ‘script’ customers, Gary, had recommended her to him. Of course, he had said no way, not needing another old lady coming in, but after hearing the description of this young lady, well, he was convinced. Apparently, she was about 5’4, long brown hair, maybe 22 years old, chubby, but huge tits. Well, Jin had been sold at the word ‘huge’. She would be at the office in an hour.
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